Sunday, June 28, 2009

Style

Not what we wear!
Some days the words flow out of my heart,
Other days, it feels stilted and disconnected.
Free form is better when it comes form the heart.
Prose is a rambling mess,
full of sharp edges that have not been shaved.
Piercing no one, but my heart.

4 comments:

listen for azure said...

You inspire me and make me feel more often than you know. Thanks for discovering me and sharing here.

Libby said...

...this is why i don't have daily posts...

Unknown said...

Libby - I do not mean to do daily posts, it something that happens. The prose usually opens some place of pain that I need completion in. The free style poetry (if you can call it that) is something that comes from a new and very deep place that I never had before I had all of this medical trauma in my life. I call it the "right side of my brain" being active.
pheromone girl - you also inspire me with your struggles. I am glad I can help in any small way.

Jeannette StG said...

How interesting that your header is a painting of someone who's fishing, while at the same time I posted pics of the guys in our family doing the same thing!
I have something similar, that on some days I can say what comes from the heart, and other days I have trouble completing a simple sentence:)